If you intend "not outstanding" to modify the noun "commercials" then you need to insert a period after "watch" and delete the comma following outstanding. When using multiple adjectives to describe a proceeding noun the last adjective is not separated from the noun by a comma.
By the way, your original construction is, in fact, a run on sentence.
Sadly, there is more than a kernel of truth in your observation regarding a decline in proper use of the language, the net effect of which is a decline in the conveyance of information. Consequently, Sarah Palin can command $100,000 appearance fees for speaking unintelligible gibberish. Unlike encounters with Palinese, we can most often discern your meaning, even when you're wrong.
Kudos to the hated Hoyas for giving SU a game. Nice to see Triche play reasonably well despite turning the ball over.
Johnson was a decent role player. He had a tough shooting night but contributed on the boards although not much else. No assists. No steals. 1 block. I am amazed that anyone can play 40 minutes in a Georgetown game without picking up a personal foul.
Andy Rautins had no trouble in that regard. However, I expect that zebra John Cahill ordered out for his post-game meal rather than risk running into Leo.
Finally, a question for a stat-head: when was the last time SU shot 82% from the line?
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